change needed

Pay attention to what is God's viewpoint about me as his child, so that his viewpoint can eventually become my own,
instead of just holding on to my own viewpoint about myself as ME

Always be aware of how he thinks and feels about me
and try communicate with that

As my parent, he always pays attention to me
and every small step I make, he gets rejoiced and excited

That one small step-- one step at a time
each step is thus an incredible chance for me
and him (them?)